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Co-authored-by: Slavi Pantaleev <slavi@devture.com>

docs/quick-start.md

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 This page explains how to use this Ansible book in order to install Matrix services on your server with minimum core services.
 
-By following the instruction on this page, you will set up **your own Matrix server**, **your user account** like `@user:example.com` on the server, and **self-hosted Matrix client**, [Element Web](configuring-playbook-client-element-web.md) with the default subdomain at `element.example.com`.
+We will be using `example.com` as the "base domain" in the following instruction.
 
-We will be using `example.com` as the "base domain" in the following instruction. Please remember to replace it with your own domain before running any commands.
+By following the instruction on this page, you will set up:
+
+- **your own Matrix server** on a `matrix.example.com` server, which is configured to present itself as `example.com`
+- **your user account** like `@user:example.com` on the server
+- a **self-hosted Matrix client**, [Element Web](configuring-playbook-client-element-web.md) with the default subdomain at `element.example.com`
+- Matrix delegation, so that your `matrix.example.com` server (presenting itself as `example.com`) can join the Matrix Federation and will be to talk to any other server in the Matrix network
+
+Please remember to replace `example.com` with your own domain before running any commands.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
 <sup>This section is optimized for this quick-start guide and is derived from the following full-documentation page: [Prerequisites](prerequisites.md)</sup>
 
-At first, **check prerequisites** and prepare for installation by setting up programs on your own computer and your server. You also need `root` access to your server (a user that could elevate to `root` via `sudo` also works).
+At first, **check prerequisites** and prepare for installation by setting up programs [on your own computer](prerequisites.md#your-local-computer) and [your server](prerequisites.md#server). You also need `root` access on your server (a user that could elevate to `root` via `sudo` also works).
 
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 TODO: Add one liners (or instructions, a script, etc.) for easy and consistent installation of required software. See: https://github.com/spantaleev/matrix-docker-ansible-deploy/issues/3757
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-It will download the playbook to `matrix-docker-ansible-deploy` inside the directory you are on.
+It will download the playbook to a new `matrix-docker-ansible-deploy` directory underneath the directory you are currently in.
 
 ## Configure the playbook
 
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 For your convenience, we have prepared example files of them. You can copy and edit them for quick start.
 
-To configure them, move to `matrix-docker-ansible-deploy`, and follow the procedure below:
+To configure them, go into the `matrix-docker-ansible-deploy` directory and follow the instructions below:
 
 1. Create a directory to hold your configuration: `mkdir -p inventory/host_vars/matrix.example.com` where `example.com` is your "base domain"
 2. Copy the sample configuration file: `cp examples/vars.yml inventory/host_vars/matrix.example.com/vars.yml`
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 **Notes:**
 - If you are not in control of anything on the base domain, you would need to set additional configuration on `vars.yml`. For more information, see [How do I install on matrix.example.com without involving the base domain?](faq.md#how-do-i-install-on-matrix-example-com-without-involving-the-base-domain) on our FAQ.
-- When you edit `vars.yml`, make sure to pick a correct domain, because you can't change the domain after deployment. If you pick a wrong one, you'll have to run the Uninstalling step.
+- When you edit `vars.yml`, make sure to pick a correct domain, because you can't change the domain after deployment. If you pick the wrong one, you'll have to run the Uninstalling step.
 
 ## Install
 
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 <sup>This section is optimized for this quick-start guide and is derived from the following full-documentation page: [Server Delegation](howto-server-delegation.md)</sup>
 
-Now you've configured Matrix services and your user account, you need to **finalize the installation process** by [setting up Matrix delegation (redirection)](howto-server-delegation.md), so that your Matrix server (`matrix.example.com`) can present itself as the base domain (`example.com`) in the Matrix network.
+Now that you've configured Matrix services and your user account, you need to **finalize the installation process** by [setting up Matrix delegation (redirection)](howto-server-delegation.md), so that your Matrix server (`matrix.example.com`) can present itself as the base domain (`example.com`) in the Matrix network.
 
 **This is required for federation to work!** Without a proper configuration, your server will effectively not be part of the Matrix network.
 
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 Finally, let's make sure that you can log in to the created account with the specified password.
 
-You should be able to log in to it with your own Element Web client which you have set up at `element.example.com` by running the playbook. Open the URL (`https://element.example.com`) on a web browser, and enter the credentials to log in.
+You should be able to log in to it with your own [Element Web](configuring-playbook-client-element-web.md) client which you have set up at `element.example.com` by running the playbook. Open the URL (`https://element.example.com`) in a web browser and enter your credentials to log in.
 
-**If you successfully logged in to your account, installing and configuring procedure is complete**🎉
+**If you successfully logged in to your account, installing and configuring is complete**🎉
 
 Come say Hi👋 in our support room - [#matrix-docker-ansible-deploy:devture.com](https://matrix.to/#/#matrix-docker-ansible-deploy:devture.com). You might learn something or get to help someone else new to Matrix hosting.